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Now your gone
Not in the crowd
I'd like to find a trace
But I don't know how
Everything in one
Has ripped me apart
And now I look so hard for you
To strengthen the heart
Losing grip
I'm out of control
And I sit here lost
Writing this poem
Your all I had and loved
So remember this
I was glad to know you
Even though you didn't know me

Even in 20 years I'll remember this feeling
when I thought this love could never stop bleeding.
Someday I'll see you somewhere my friend
and I won't let the moment go to lose you again.

[I'm going to use this last bit for something else probably cause it doesn't seem to fit and it has potential I think.]
©2004-2009 ~briansalo
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Wow, I havent posted anything I've written in a long while... well heres something that I concieved in about 5 minutes, the thing behind it is, now this year I get to Vanier to catch my bus home much much earlier... but I decided I was going to force myself if I had to just to go talk to her, but now she's not there anymore. Its kinda about that, you'll know who she is if you read some previous entries... why don't I just write her name you ask? fine have it your way! her name is Zoe.

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